Writing in 3/4H
In 3/4H we have been working hard to ensure we add WOW! words in our writing to make our readers say, "WOW!" Here are some examples of things we have written this week.
'The owl is flying to the green strong nest.' -Millie
'The green owl is flying through the sunset to his nest' -Charlie
'The spongy rocket landed awkwardly on the damaged planet.' -Madeline
'The chubby, fearless boy was 10 years old.' -Mason
'The Gnome King always wears a cape on one side, it is evil green and blood red.' - Ruby
'Suddenly 15 odd looking storm troopers appeared.' - Oscar
'In the spongy mysterious rocket, an astronaut looked at the horrible alien.' -Tyler
'The spotty rocket landed on the crumbly planet with all the aliens.' -Billy
'There was a chocolate laser gun.' -Riley
'One beautiful day there were two lovely birds that have red and black feathers.' -Eliza
'The chocolate rocket went flying to the smiley disgusting green planet.' - Amelia
'I got into some dry warm clothes.' - Olivia